HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AT LAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The chance to stay up to 3 AM and not have to get up until 12, but i assume just like most other people ill be doing nothing for the first week so i thought id write a blog and ask for some help.
As clearly we will never get to do that animal farm rip off in class i thought next term i might give it a try myself, i had other stuff in mind but i prefer this. so this is where i need help.
I've got a bit of it planned out (the first 40 secs) but now im kinda stuck, so any ideas are really apreciated. ill include the first part of the script down below and just suggest ideas :)
thanks
EXT play ground day
Several shots of school
Voice over
It was to be a day of judgment...we could tell by the horrible clouds in the sky...
CUT TO: SHOT OF BLUE SKY
VOICE OVER (CONT'D)
For 4 years we had be thrown to the ground, threatened with detentions and clean-up duties, assignment after assignment all expected to be done withing the week...well now we are to stand up for ourselves.
int 102
coffee cup slams down onto table
Goodwin
Right! open your books.
i likie it, very clever.
ReplyDeleteI dont have many ideas cause i dont think i was there when you guys were planning this so if its wrong i'm sorry.
but
somewhere you need a shot of the staffroom, with the teachers planning assignments and saying that we're only stupid kids etc
Amy
yeh, and, because this is going to be (kinda) short, we also need to have a shot of students in the first scene, mayube like grumbling or something like that.....
ReplyDeletehmmm.... ummmm
and then we can "satarise" deat poets society, and stand on tables :)
Well, there's my contribution, hope it helps :)
yeh wellll you see i went to bed at wat 11pm and got up at 1:30pm the next day hahaha that was an effort :) i like the sounds of it so far! keep it going. but i think we should involve erasmo into the movie :)
ReplyDeletehmm, i kinda need some help with wat should happen next though, like what goodwin says that forces the uprising. after that i should be good to write the rest
ReplyDeletethe uprising should be in detention or something like that. Goodwin gives our whole english class a detention cause he feels like it and then we go trash the school.
ReplyDelete????????
just a thought
Amy
Goodwin forgets to mark our assignments.Then the uprising will start haha
ReplyDeleteOh my god, Marie. Hehe...
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